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Untitled - strange

Cryptic words
Twisted Images

Consume the spider
Else you be consumed
Sink your fangs
Into warm flesh

Trade your beliefs
For but a pittance
Starving slowly
On pitiful meals
Steal a dollar
Needing no dime

Sweet morsels
Melt on your lips
Deprived of taste
Tortured by smell

Buy salvatoin
Donate your dollar

Author notes

I didn't even knwo what this was when I wrote it. You expect me to know over a week later? Bah. Bah I say!
Written February 26th, 2005

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  • Merciless Beauty
    February 26, 2005
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    I agree this is abit strange..or weird..and I also have NO idea what you meant by this lol, but I liked alot..nice use of words and rhythem was good to

    ~*Meri