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Negativity

Negativity
Sometimes surrounds me.
A feeling of captivity,
Words thrown around,
Like debris.

Wanting to feel loved,
and wanting to be free,
Right now feeling shoved,
Hear my plea,
Unloved.

Don't take this wrong,
Feeling quite fine.
I want to be strong,
God give me a sign.
So long.

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Goodness. I dont know why I wrote this but I did. Doesn't really make sense. Think whatever you may!
Written February 25th, 2005

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  • Nymph
    October 7, 2008

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    Aww sorry you felt this way. It sounds like that middle stage between liking the lonliness and wanting it to stop but not knowing how. Hope it happened for you in the end hence your absence. Like the poem. Simple, but effective