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In my dreams!

I am so lost
I don't know anything anymore
I thought I knew
but i just don't
I dont got a damn clue
all I want is you
You are my life
but yet you are there
and I am here
Why is life like this
all I need and want is a simple kiss

So as I lay my head down tonight
in my dreams you will be holding me tight
and that kiss you leave upon my soft lips
will forever be a grateful bliss
and when I wake up to the mornning light
I will hold that kiss all day long
till the next day comes to an end
and I can see you yet again.

And in my dreams we can dance upon the stars
and hold each other tight
and wrap up in the fluffy clouds
and not worry about anything
cause in my dreams
you are not so far away
you are here with me forever to stay
and in my dreams i don't cry!

In my dreams I am happy
You are my love, my life
I have nothing without you here
so in my dreams i wish i could stay.

So i shall go to sleep
and whisper these words goodnight
cause in awhile i will be seeing you

I CANT WAIT

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Written February 24th, 2005

It's old but i did win a silver trophy for it

A contest entry

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  • The Madman silver member
    November 19, 2007

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    Another Seet Love Song

    Wouldnt it be great if our dreams could come true, oh what a lovely life we'd have, forever and again. Your kind and sorrowful heart shows well here as in others I have read of yours,

    A true romantic

    Evan


    • lizwicker
      November 19, 2007
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      Awww thank you .. lol and years later it did come true.. im now married to him.. and could never be happier

  • Mercury Rising
    October 9, 2007

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    Quite the touching and heart-felt poem and plea that was very well written and a pleasure to read. Best of luck, and thanks for entering.

    M.R.

  • Dark Angel 89
    February 12, 2006
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    Happiness only found in a world that is completely imaginary. Tho there is some hope of finding love. Truely moving. Thanks for entering.


  • Wandika gold member
    November 16, 2005
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    Another interesting love poem that is so hoping for a relationship with someone. I hope it works out for you. Mine did not. Keep writing.

    Jim

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