To Always Stand True
To give my heart
Doth done for you
My strong feelings bound
Tis wholly true
My hand doth shake
In the precense of thee
As thouest loving smile
Does capture me
Holding me hence
Keeping me still
As I see through her eyes
A promise to fullfill
My Calypso, my angel
My beauty in all
It seems I am not worthy
But I answer the call
To words of sung
I serenely hear
Make it last forever
And never diappear
I cannot explain
No words to express
The feeling of growing warmth
And surely nothing less
As I see my love
To approach her hence
Is a journey fondly grand
To souly take this chance
I come to thee
Full of innocent bliss
Sharing passionate feelings
As we doth kiss
And innocent no longer
I shall remain
As my spirit goes with her
My purity hath lain
A choice I will make
As reasons are sound
For I have found my love
And through her I am found
Giving me life
My angel did new
As I gaze in awe and wonder
I will always stand true
I will always stand true
Author notes
This was a Valentine's day to my girlfriend Laura. She is no longer with me at the moment, but she will return to me very soon. I care for her with all my heart. Tell me what you think.
Written February 24th, 2005
A contest entry
- Lovely, aren't you? by Enchanted Butterfly.
300 points, ended January 22, 2006, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Love Poetry Ever Written!!!! Give Me All of Your Passion!!! by Eulb kcalB.
350 points, ended March 28, 2008, 26 entries
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Comments
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Wow, what a very beautiful poem. I love it! Good Luck.
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Wow. How odd. Were the only two entered in this contest at the moment and ya know whats weird? My name is Laura. I just got out of a relationship *He broke up with me, not vice versa. I would never* but I'm hoping/kinda thinking we'll be back together soon and your last comment was left onMy birthday *March 8* Unfortunantally that was the worst birthday I ever had and two days later was the worst day *in general* that I had. Weird huh? Well good luck in the contest.
Love always
{K}itty -
This was nice and lovely write for your girlfriend great job i would of love it if given to me thanks for entering***
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I LOVE THIS!!! I hope it works out with her...if not then she doesnt deserve a talented loving person such as yourself...this is one of the best and truest things i have read of yours...nice!
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That was beautiful. I hope everything goes well.
Love
Mel -
Great!!
As I see my love
To approach her hence
Is a journey fondly grand
To souly take this chance
I come to thee
Full of innocent bliss
Sharing passionate feelings
As we doth kiss
And innocent no longer
I shall remain
As my spirit goes with her
My purity hath lain
I love these lines, it explains this "event" very illusively yet still very much understandable! Its amazing how much detail you can capture with such little words in each stanza! Great job! :: Applauded ::
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