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Goth culture is for me. It fits.

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Goth culture is for me. It fits.
morose subculture of Gothic fantasy.


 

Darkness at a safe distance.


 

Anarchy. Nostradamus. Doomsday.


 

Under my black trench coat exists the poetry
music and dress of the scene
that spans an array from passive fantasy
to brutal reality.


 

Whether in a dungeon or with a dragon
black is my keeper
in a world of medieval images in the shade.
Funerals and the macabre
are commemorated in my symbolism
that distances me from the school jocks.


 

Occult. I want to be left alone
but I want to be seen,
and see the shock and mystification in the faces I meet.


 

Body piercing, bondage items,
light-colored makeup
in my medieval, Victorian, and Edwardian history.


 

Religious symbols adorn, depression surrounds.
Sullen, withdrawn in the general public,
happy around other Goths
and my gloomy music.


 

Pain. Anger. Dysfunctional family
with troubled childhood are my scars.
Desperation, despair, angst
are my daggers.


 

Like a silent film I walk this life.
As a dark painting I populate it.
I see the coming destruction
and the world crumbling around me.
Where art seems to be lacking,
I bring darkness
and embrace it
with the murky recesses of my human psyche.
Dark sensuality, outlawed love,
deep sadness as we ridicule ourselves
then break out in laughter.


 

A good smoke.
If someone looks like a Goth,
and likes Goth music,
there is a good chance the person is a Goth.
Especially if they deny it.


 

Mohawks, fishnets, black eyeliner,
long black hair in 18th century garb
in crushed velvet and leather,
shimmering black satin and PVC.

 

A haunting female singer
on a doomed planet
dressed in black and white,
chained platform shoes,
streaming studded dress
spilling like a sad anachronism
onto the mystical stage of life.


 

I'm even fond of the books and gifts,
clubs and shops,
concerts, events,
bands and people,
blogs and gossip.


Into the future- wired with LED's and WIFI, 
armed with lasersabres of Gothic light.


 

For now I am a corporate Goth-
less disturbing to my co-workers
and yet satisfying my tastes-
black-fitted suits, black shirts,
red ties, embroidered brocade vests.
toned down, but it still feels like me.
Conservative Goth.
People think it’s a designer thing.
Little do they know
how well it fits.


 

 


 

 


 

 


 

 


 

 


 

 


 

 


 

 


 

 


 

 


 

 


 

 


 

 


 

 


 

 


 


 

Author notes

Have you ever wondered why people become the way they do?
Maybe it's simply because it fits.
This is a silent slice of Goth culture and it's psyche.

Written February 24th, 2005

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  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    April 12, 2005
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    Love the piece! I really enjoyed reading it
    Gothic Angel


  • OneMorePeacefulDay
    April 11, 2005
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    Conservative Goth...So hard to accomplish in this day and age. Such a forward description of Goth culture...Like an anthem for those of us that were born to be different and dare to turn heads. Two thumbs up.


  • Mannequin
    March 14, 2005
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    I love how you describes goth culture. It's as if you looked in the mirror and saw goth culture. It seems to fit you naturally. That's awesome. I just hate it when people because goth because it's "cool". Goth is a way of being. Gothic clothes are a trend for some but for others, it's the only skin they'll ever be comfortable in. Great write that expands on the usual ideas of what goth is.


  • x9Nocturnal9x
    March 13, 2005
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    Some choose to be who they are to be different..a rebel if you will..some choose to be natural and if they decide this is what fits..bingo..even those who choose to be natural and wish to be seen as natural and recognized for what they are..why would they begin to speak trash of others who wish for the same thing..everyones different and whenever you see a "label" as they're called there is going to be a clash of ego..a clash between "labels"..well whether anyone likes it or not we are labels..we are human..we are all the same..just shells with different colors and wrappings..the insides are all the same and if it takes as much as everyone having to walk around inside-out for us to realize we're the same then that's pretty darn sad I know this might've been pointless but I just wanted to get that in! I love the way you described the goth culture as more than just a fashion or music genre..once again you have proven to take your work seriously and this piece is obviously thought-provoking! welcome to my bookmarks list yet again! lol
    -Lis


  • Touchof1der silver member
    February 27, 2005
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    I am stunned. I have no idea what to comment here. You have me laughing as well as stuck in this deep thinking mode, which happens more often than not when I read you. This should prove to be quite a challenge to beat in the contest though. Mode medals to line your shelf. Good luck!
    ♥ Kimberly


  • wbiro gold member
    February 24, 2005
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    hmm, I'll have to go back and find that intimate! Thanks!


  • Allyson Michelle
    February 24, 2005
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    What a beautiful piece. So truthful and complex. You are obviously a very talented writer. I love teh unique form and the language-very intimate and toned. This piece is unline any other in this contest and is very honest, with a beautiful touch to it. Bravo.


  • wbiro gold member
    February 24, 2005
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    A little smiley guy- if you don't mind I think I have another stanza here- into the future... you've done it again.


  • B2oH
    February 24, 2005
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    Well...duh! If this is a prototypical goth babe, I wanna be goth too. GRIN.

    I've always been drawn to this side of culture...but more hardware oriented perhaps....cyberpunkish. Yah...that's the ticket. Goth with LEDs and wires. Gods with WIFI.....and laser sabers.......

    Wire me up.

    Actually the look is drawn not only from punk... but mainstream music. Consider Stevie Nicks of Fleetwood Mac -- she was dressing goth before there was a Goth movement. I once met an engineer who was obsessed with her.....to the point of my being embarrassed by it. Odd.

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