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Untainted


a tender infant...
covered in velvet-like skin
true love’s purity




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Written February 24th, 2005

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  • pozo
    February 27, 2005
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    Good haiku, this was a beautiful, tender write Keep writing and thanks for commenting on my song
    All the best,
    Pozo

  • Anulka silver member
    February 26, 2005
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    Thank you so much for your comment

  • peter1
    February 25, 2005
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    Yep, you have described the perfection of innocent babies here. Nice work. Thanks for entering.

    Peter

  • Anulka silver member
    February 24, 2005
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    Thank you SO much for your sweet comment!
    Anulka


  • poetryality silver member
    February 24, 2005
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    This is touching! It portrays the beauty of a new-born with a wondrous brush. Very enchanting! I love haikus and this one makes me love them even more. So much said in so few words. EXQUISITE!!! For your first haiku, I say; "BRAVO"! The best to you in this challenge my friend.

    Much Love,
    Renee ♥

  • Anulka silver member
    February 24, 2005
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    Thank you Mari!
    As a matter a fact... since this was my very first Haiku, I thought about you (The queen of haikus that is) when I was writing it.
    Anulka


  • Mari Goes gold member
    February 24, 2005
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    This has a lovely feel Anulka!
    Very tender indeed

    Kisses and love,
    Mari

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