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Dragon's Prayer

The Dragon's Prayer

The Dragon is wise beyond its years,
it sets no limits and faces all fears.
The Dragon is powerful in body and mind,
is true to its heart and true to its kind.
The Dragon is just, and fights for what's right.
To all who encounter it, their lives are made bright.
The traits of the Dragon we should all embrace,
and together we'll make the world a better place.

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Written February 23rd, 1998

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  • pentopaper
    November 1, 2005
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    Oh, I knew I liked dragons for some reason!!! I like the whole feel of this...like wisdom being passed along the ages. We can all take lesson from this fabulous write, and the dragon too! Karen

  • imjusbnme
    May 23, 2005
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    Thanks. Yea I love dragons as well, as you can tell. The Dragon's Prayer is a way of life for me. I try my best to live up to it.


  • Huntress silver member
    May 23, 2005
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    Dragons are cool, you have pretty good rhyming skills yourself


  • ToltecWarrior
    February 24, 2005
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    Great

    Great theme. I like dragons. This poem shows alot of insight. The words flow beautifully and the message is great. As a warrior, I embrace those traits of the Dragon. There is no other way to be. peace
    be great-
    Toltec Warior

  • imjusbnme
    February 23, 2005
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    Your're right about the "it's". I have corrected it. Thanks for pointing it out,and thanks for the comments.


  • WindUpEnigma gold member
    February 23, 2005
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    Mmm....line 6 sounded a lil forced, and it should be "its" instead of "it's," but other than that, I really like this piece...has a flavor of wisdom, the knowledge of the ages and such...which is exactly what dragons (the ones that don't try to eat you, anyway) are all about. Great write!

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