Arch-Angel, Dark Angel, send me thine light
For I feel it is time to me to fight
I clench my fists really tight
I battle my ass all through the night
Let it go- my evil one--let it go--
put down that gun--let it go--
i say no fun-- let it go--
and now you're done
and now you're DONE
Shut your mouth you evil tramp
why don't you just shut those clamps
how bout I bounce your face up off that ramp
in your blood my clothes are damp.
Author notes
Just a little from listening to music
Written February 23rd, 2005
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Ive re-read this one and my brain is annalyzing it. it started okay pretty good like you were asking for help and then you werent going too, but in the end you killed. hmm.. good. lol.
I love you,
Sarah
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Interesting music!!
Great rhyming! Bravo!
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hey hun, i miss you, im at school 6th hour and im dying to see you but all in good time. This is a really good poem, lots of emotion into it. amana is right, it sounds kind of like a chanting song. i love your word choice and the arch-angel dark angel.
well i hope your first day at PACT turned out well, everyone says i look sad i am but i look foreward to seeing you. i really hope we can do something on friday. i still feel bad that the necklace broke.
But ill fix it. Well i should go. I LOVE YOU!
Amore Eterno
Sarah
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cool one!!!! i like the music you listen to, the chanting one, because it's really soothing.
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