As I sit here,
listening to my heart.
Filled with love,
yet so terrified,
terrified of what I'm told is fate.
They say were too young to last.
I say they're wrong!
Yet as time flies by.
My sheath of denial is slowly pealed away.
As I see the immortal couples crumble.
My life soon pears into reality,
as I notice no relationship can last forever.
Or can they?
Time can only tell,
but I'm willing to take that gamble.
Even if this happiness is only momentary.
It's happiness none the less,
and we wont know if we don't give it a try.
Author notes
ya, I know this poem stinks but I wrote it just to get some feelings out. And it helped. hehe so I could care less if its poetically correct. Have a nice day! hehe
P.S. If this is my gf reading this I will love you now and forever! 
Written February 23rd, 2005
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loved it!
i think that this is a great piece of writing. adn although i dont believe in love at first sight true love or everlasting love--if anyone can pull it off i think it may very well be the two of you. prove me wrong babe! show me its possible! -
Excellent, Im sure your gf loved this, this goes along with the saying "everything must come to an end", wjoever said that should have known that love can win given the right hearts to reside in. Great write, ill be back to read more, you are one of my favorites now,
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the seasons may change, between sweet spring and frozen winter, but my love for you... shall remain evergreen. I beleive we can make it through anything love.. even the tests of time.
this is a wonderful poem though.. great feeling and truth in it.. keep it up!! 
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