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A Savored Embrace

Look into my eyes and see
How beautiful you are to me.
Listen to my silent tears
And hear the love
My mouth cannot speak.

Feel my hands caress yours.
Allow them to trace your contours.
Come near as I draw you close.
Feel the warmth of my face
Snuggling next to yours.

Let’s not speak a word.
Know words that cannot be heard.
Suffer the joy of holding you in my arms
Enraptured by your pleasant charms.
Let this moment be savored.

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Another cyber hug.
Written February 23rd, 2005

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  • masterblaster gold member
    January 24, 2008
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    Hi, a tender and lovely poem, hugs Di


    • melphleg gold member
      January 24, 2008
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      Thanks

      Thanks for reading. Hope you enjoyed the "hug"


  • La Mort a Vous
    March 4, 2005
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    Sweet & Joyful

    Wow...That was sweet and joyful. I loved it with a passion.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    February 24, 2005
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    beautiful~

    A most welcomed cyber hug indeed
    I love it and thank you for thinking of me
    It was wonderful talking to you tonight
    You are a beautiful, and wonderful friend
    I appreciate you a lot and for all the things you have done for me
    Love n a from me to you
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Onfire4Jesus
    February 23, 2005
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    Very Beautiful and well written. A great way to send a hug over the computer. Well done my friend!! God Bless You!!


  • Samplette gold member
    February 23, 2005
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    OH yummy...that is a delicious cyber hug. Who ever you have sent it to I am sure is glowing with happiness. Very nice work. It sings as you read it, for it has a wonderful flow.
    Excellent read!!
    S♥m



  • melphleg gold member
    February 23, 2005
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    You may print it. I'd be honored.


  • ljeenu
    February 23, 2005
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    Savored

    Most definitely savored. That is a great poem! You are definitely talented. Keep up the awesome work in your writtings. Take care
    -Brooke


  • Cant find herself
    February 23, 2005
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    Que BELLO!!!
    That means its beautiful. I love it...I want to print it and give it to my boyfriend right now.


  • fadedbyfate
    February 23, 2005
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    Good write. I did enjoy. pEace.

    X~Rianydaysuicide~X

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