I'm miserable when you're away
But at least I know you're mine
And by my side you'll always stay
Your love for me grows daily as mine to thine
I know we've done many wrongs
But they've come to an end
Because we've found where our heart belongs
And in a matter of time it all depends
We've made up of mind
To say no more to that thing called a lie
We've found what we were hoping to find
And without one another we'll surely die
This part of my life I never wanna blot
Cuz this is happiness where sorrow is not
02/05/05
@home
8:40 pm
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Written February 23rd, 2005
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Poetic soldier
I've written some poetry about you before and i just haven't posted it yet. if you'd like me too i will but i won't say it is "directly" for you; but you would know. Neways thanks again for reading.
XOXO
~laura -
I love your Poetic Heart. Your poem sings with the beauty of pure love. The beauty of your poetry can be felt within each line. Even when your seperated by distance your still connected in such a very special way. The love you carry within you for your sweetheart is very special. You write poetry so very well and I always enjoy reading such special poetry. Great writting..
Poetic Soldier -
Damien,
Thank you for your kind comment. Glad you enjoyed my work.
XOXO
~Laura -
an amazing write,,very great to read
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Thank you for reading my work Eddy. Glad i made you smile
XOXO
~laura -
"Your love for me grows daily as mine to thine"
That line made me smile...
Hugs...Eddy
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