Hold me close,
Against your chest.
Without words,
Let your lips do the rest.
Unless you touch me,
I am incomplete.
As I feel the pouring,
Of each heart beat.
Let's merge our bodies,
From shoulder to knee.
Like two twinning raindrops,
Let me feel your need.
Let me feel your pulse quicken,
As our hearts takes flight.
Rising with our desire,
On this stormy night.
Let your kisses burn,
Transfering their fire,
Seeking hidden places,
You raise my desire.
Trying to get closer,
Wanting even more.
A feel of flying,
Taken wings to soar.
A hot seeking hunger,
Message without voice,
Our bodies melt together,
Leaving us no choice.
Lips softly parted,
Thrusts dark and sweet,
Seeking pure rythem,
As our bodies meet.
Hands caressing,
From hips to thighs,
Mouth slowly tracing,
The trail of my sighs.
Climbing ever higher,
Bodies enterlocking and wet,
Moving towards fulfillment,
Drenched in sweat.
Like tides on an ocean,
Our bodies meet,
On a crest we ride,
Until passion peaks.
Passions now spent,
You still hold me tight.
Like you'll never let go.
On this dark rainy night.
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Lovely! Thanks for this excellent submission!
Beautiful piece, quite romantic.
forfillment should probably be fulfillment?
"Passions now spent,
You still hold me tight.
Like you'll never let go.
On this dark rainy night."
My favorite lines...
Great write... good luck! -
I want to thank everybody that entered my contest. This being the first. I didn’t know what to think. I will have the final judging in the allot time that is required. I plan to have 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place winners. I am also going to be giving points on honorable mentions as well. After I pick the winners I will be personally leaving a comment for each and
everyone of you. I hope you enjoyed enter my contest as I will enjoy reading all the stories and poems.
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WOW!..All your poems are outstanding...but this one I liked really well...Very erotic...and the words became a feeling..
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don't touch it!
Erotic and tasteful. Very well done.
~Kathy -
don't touch it!
very senusal and passionate write, beautifully done. I am looking forward to reading morre of your work. blessed be -
don't touch it!
Very passionate...I love this...its a really good write =)
--Lindy -
don't touch it!
Whoooohooo
Hot and sensual
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Blessings
Susan~
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