Follow me if you would
On a journey through my mind
I hope you like what you see
And enjoy what you find
A mind so full of junk
Of useless lil things
Some thoughts of myths and legends
Of angels w/ extravagant wings
Sometimes you'll find history
And occasionally a poem or two
Sometimes so much nonsense
You won't be able to break through
Sometimes some thoughts of madness
Also some of extreme hate
Sometimes thoughts of pure happiness
Or standing before pearly gates
Sometimes thoughts of the future
And this is where you'll find
Sometimes my mind's a mind of it's own
Because this is where I unwind
For this is where my eternal happiness is
The place I go to see
The oh so many mental pictures
Of the people who mean the world to me
02/21/05
@home
9:05 pm
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Written February 23rd, 2005
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Thanks raquel05 for reading my poetry.
XOXO
~laura -
This is an Awesome poem. It really tells alot about you and how you think. Keep up the good work.
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Thank you John and Damien for reading my work. Thank you much. Sorry i've been gone but we had tons of snow! LOL See ya laters you guys!
XOXO
~laura -
Laura, this was very nice. I love to read your uplifting and lighthearted writes. They are refreshing like you wouldn’t believe. I would recommend one thing though. Don’t use “w/” in place of the real word “with.” It really takes away from the impact of the piece when writers do that. To me, it looks a little lazy, but that’s just my opinion hun. You know? All in all, I really did enjoy this.
~ John
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wow, absolutely incredible,,i enjoyed reading this very much, you have a real talent that i wont start to try to explain for i'll make myself look retarded probably...so i'll end this with a "good job" for my own protection,,cya later!!
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ZYI,
Thanks again.
XOXO
~laura -
Thank you so much Jabber! Love ya
XOXO
~laura -
Watuwant,
Glad you enjoyed this write as well. I shall try to keep it up!
XOXO
~laura -
nice write
Thank you Velvetsoul for checking out my work. I'm glad you enjoyed, stop by any time to read more.
XOXO
~laura -
this was brilliant, i loved it, the rythem and flow was perfect....sweet write too! keep it up!
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I like this, tis beautiful.
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Bravo!
Awwww, now how can you not smile after reading something like this? Perfect, just the way it stands, as though we really had taken a journey through your mind!
This is what poetry is all about!
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Scintillating!
This is a nifty, uplifting piece too! Great job! Too bad all people do not enjoy their own mind so much! They can learn much here!
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