‘Lectric fans are wondrous beasts,
‘Cause anywhere you set ‘em,
They’ll blow a cool and gentle breeze—
But please, don’t try to pet ‘em.
Author notes
circa 1995-96; If you like this one, you may like "Keyhole?" and "You Can Say That Again". Thanks as always for reading and commenting.
Written October 2nd, 2002
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HAHAHAHAHAH Lectricity was invented by Muddy Waters,wasn't it??? hehehheeh hell i don't know.. I am on medications..
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heh simple little write..... that bares to give advice to morons (heh heh) likes -
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Lovely little ditty, I give it one thumb up! (Sadly, the other one didn't read your poem and has gone missing.)
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don't touch it!
good one and good advice :)pjs -
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This reminded me of the time I actually did stick my finger into a fan I was little of course and it tickled a bit I must say. hohoho. :D -Brandon -
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lol..cute
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lol nando you never fail to amaze me with your little ditties
so smooth and seamless to read
well done you once again
Lisa x -
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Ouch! chewed fingers..
Barbsx -
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Good advice. :)
--Jenny -
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Great little poem Nando.....Janet -
don't touch it!
lmao veryyyy cute eheheh ..still laughin..always remember..ahah...dont pet..
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don't touch it!
Roflmao lol lectric fan.....don't pet.....ahhhhh ya killing me...
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don't touch it!
nando! lOLOL dont touch it!!!! -
don't touch it!
Roflmao... a pet lectric fan..you are losing your marbles Nando...lmaoroflmao....hehehehehhe ~~~GILL~~~~ -
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What a soothing little ode, for those in hotter climes,
Just the sort of thing you’d need while cogitating rhymes,
And yes again you are so right! Not top of the pet scene,
But then again for most people – nor is wolverine! -
don't touch it!
I'll bandage those fingers lol
Cute
Love ya
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hehe cute...one time when i was younger (although still old enough to know better), i wanted to see whether or not my finger would fit through the bars...while the fan was on...well needless to say, it fit... -
don't touch it!
LOL!!
So..this is where the finger came from!
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so true, but often have to clean 'em, -
don't touch it!
lmao....cute write, reminds me of my kids. you tell em over and over not to touch, but their curiosity makes them want to touch it more cause you said `no ~Amy~ -
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Where were you when the fit hit the shan? -
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Ouch! :) Good write
Stevie
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