Once I could hear
When sorrow sang
Once I could see
The blood on my fang
And when you lied
And the bells rang
I could only hear
When sorrow sang
Once I would fear
That sorrow sang
And I could feel
The blood on my fang
I would be the one to scream
When the bells rang
I could only be
When sorrow sang
Author notes
Please take nothing literally 
Written November 18th, 2004
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i don't mind if you do or don't really, you can read away, and comment on anything, and thank-you for offering
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definately sorrowful.. (trust me to state the obvious) since you said don't take it literally, i'm wondering did this have a purpose? or was this just something that came out of nowhere? either way, wonderfully written, my friend. write on
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So great. I loved the way you stuck with the 'ang' rhyme and it still didn't sound forced! I could imagine this as a song actually. So pretty, yet dark. Very well done.
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ah ha, you vampire, lol jkin, i love vampires so interesting, i actually like the taste of my own blood, nasty I know :S, anyway this was really good, i love the line when sorrow sang, heehee, well done brilliant write, keep it up!!!! be safe
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But I do want to
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you don't have to read any of it if you don't want to...
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this is brillient!!! emm am speachless and that doesn't happen often....
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