Stop, stop dead
Stop this pounding in my head
Come out into the light of day
Where I can fight you away
My memories
Are boundaries
They take me out of control
My mind is bouncing back and forth
To find out what they stole
I recall people I would rather forget
And they attack before I’m all set
I lose the fight before it even begins
Because already then, I know that it wins
At war with my head
I am already dead
It knows where to be
It knows what to see
I try to erase
Or rewind the pace
Look into my face
And see my mind, the twisted uneasy place
Stop, stop dead
Stop this pounding in my head
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Written October 15th, 2004
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i agree with LP except that i would say you're battling with your thoughts, or like in the poem, your memories.. good write, my friend. keep it up
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now this is good, lol, i liked this because its as if there are demons in your mind (prob got that wrong knowing me) but i still like it, its to me as if you battle these demons everyday of every waking hour, and you cannot defeat them, but its an awsum write, wanna see more like this
, be safe
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^.^; wow! Way intense!!
*fixing hair*
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