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Alright

Things could be alright
They will be so tonight
Because I want it to be so
Because if they don’t I will surely go
Out of my mind
Away from the way they bind
My ways
Counting my days
I know they do
But I count theirs too

Things would be just fine
Under control they are all mine
I will not have it any other way
They still cannot erase my day
It belongs to me
As does everything I want to be
Always
Until the tide lays
I know it will
I am only waiting ‘till...

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Written November 21st, 2004

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  • Smores Girl89
    February 24, 2005
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    i wish you had written what/who this was about.. well done, my friend, though i'm not sure i understand it. i like it. keep on

    -m-

    i think " 'till " is " 'til ", btw.. other than that, perfectly done, my friend