One night I saw the moon crash
She was never seen again
Though she was not gone in a flash
I could only dream of her from then
One night I saw the moon dance
And I caught a glimpse of her smile
The feeling of happiness in a glance
Could go on for just one more little while
Father of
My mother
Gone away too soon
Sister of
My brother
Deep inside the moon
One night I saw the moon go black
I feared how she would cry
I realized she turned her back
Because we let her die
Father of
My mother
Gone away too soon
Sister of
My brother
Deep inside the moon
I knew this could not
Why did I smile too?
I knew it all the same but
I know I didn't see you
One night I saw the moon cry
But they were happy tears
This night I saw the moon fly
No longer wrapped in fears
Author notes
I would very much like to know what you see in this poem....
What is it about...?
Written December 3rd, 2004
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hey... i'm w riting on this.. i like this poem and moons and starsh ave always been my favourite subject.. i liked ur style here deary.. it moved liek a song.. not sure.. whteher i will do it soo well.. but still i will try to rewrite this
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I see saddness,MJ,though I am unsure where.(does that make sense?LOL) I love "Father of my Mother gone wat too soon" I think we can relate to that line. I am touched.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
Deena
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i won't try to explain what i think this poem is about because i know i wouldn't be able to say it right.. but anyway..
i think it's beautiful. i love the moon.. wonderfully written. the way you have it, it sounds sort of like a song.. gorgeous, my friend. just gorgeous. keep writing
-m-
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This is quite deep.. I love the way you worded it..great job..i really like this one!
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I see family and what you invision of family in this poem. It's very well written and I really like the flow
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