Beyond the lines and rays and points
Beyond the area of a cube
There lies a greater variable
and that, my dear, is you
Behind the factual facade
behind the 1's and 0's, true
There's a better source of reason
and that, my dear, is you
For you, though lacking formulas
and without proven truth
your affection's larger than this plane-
and in itself, a proof
But with you, I see so clearly
the composition of this world
is not of numerals and spheres,
but emotions, now unfurled
Abandon manners of fact- not fiction
and to this love, take heed
the only lies are thoughts cast stone,
as we are without need.
Author notes
This is my attempt at poetry.
Written February 22nd, 2005
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most poets cannot speak of numbers- it's very very refreshing to see you can- you should enter this into a contest- it would wind by default because of it's oddness- not to say it doesn't show talent- i like this a lot.
blessed be -
Wow! That's a great attempt at poetry! Sheesh! That was really good...I'm guessing we have a mathematician in the crowd! Welcome to AP...and thank you for the great comment on my poem, Double Wench Romp. That was a collaboration between me and an insanely talented poet named poetryality. It is definitely different than my usual writing style...LOL!
I look forward to reading your other writes!
Lorena
Edited on Mar 05, 9:07 p.m. because 'stupid typos!'.
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