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One Fine Lady


standing against the rail,
wind in my hair,
foam caps on ocean waves,
salt spray in my face,
feels good today,
the clouds the sun,
fluffy and bright

we turn into the wind,
anticipation,
heart beat increasing,
to the focsle,
a marvelous site,
birds of prey catapult,
into the light,
flexing their muscle,
demonstrating their might,
not for vanity,
but for peace,
a determent to any,
looking for a fight

the primary mission,
though dangerous,
in its own right,
protect America,
her shores,
her people,
live without fear tonight

birds only one facet,
that makes her run,
she is my carrier, second to none

providing an opportunity,
not for everyone,
we don't serve,
her for fun,
we serve to prove patriotism,
is far from done,
our flag,
still stands for freedom,
throughout the world,
still number one

no country dare harm you,
with us on the sea,
the price tag,
hefty indeed,
she's no cheap Lady,
as you can see,
It's a strong Navy,
helps keep us free

she'll proudly carry the banner,
two hundred years more,
her history retold,
by sailors,
as fireside lore

An old saying,
one in which, we must believe,
"Sailors belong on ships, Ships belong at sea"
this age old addage,
ensures liberty,
makes serving this Lady,
a pleasure indeed

Mac

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Written February 22nd, 2005

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  • Mac McGovern gold member
    February 22, 2005
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    I thank you kind sir for your wonderful comments and look forward to reading your work as well. Thanks again.

    Mac


  • Not-The-Sun silver member
    February 22, 2005
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    great

    kinda long, but you kept my attention the whole way through!! Great form, I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the great work. I look forward to more by u ! xXxXx *Jordan**