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Blushfulmoon

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I look upon the face of the beautiful moon
And my heart gives a lonely sigh.
My lovely moon has been worn with years
Of painful nights filled with waterless tears.

Alone in a star studded sky
My moon’s light begins to fade
As her sun begins it’s descent
Leaving cold shadows to create the crescent.

How I long to descend upon my moon
And bring healing to her scars,
But my moon is out of reach of my passion
Nor can she be helped by my compassion.

I try to launch my love across the sky,
But it is unable to leave the ground.
So I wrap my arms around the air
For my beautiful moon is not there.

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For Susan
Written February 22nd, 2005

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  • voice of reason
    February 26, 2005
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    Beautiful, loving poem from a loving heart.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    February 24, 2005
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    Well
    Sweetie
    This is beautiful. I have slept an entire day and half
    I just can't cope with things right now I am feeling some better
    Going to bookmark this one Thank you for this beautiful poem
    I love ya & your plant (topiary) is on my table in the living room
    You sent me that, Maureen Liz and Sally sent me a plant and Ann aka Haran sent me a beautiful Gardenia Plant
    Thank you for everything just being there and listening
    And for all you have done
    I love ya
    Hugs n love
    Susan~~~~