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Deep Within My Heart

You made me cry when I was happy
You made me happy when I was sad
You showed me love
but I pushed away...
Afaid to love,to be loved
Afraid of hurt
I want to be close to you
But I don't know how
Don't know how to start
All these emotions
Buried deep within my heart
-written by me

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Written February 22nd, 2005

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  • Sooper
    February 22, 2005
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    a mythic poem

    this is an inspiring poem of deep inner love and it will be worshiped for generations!!!


  • -diamond tears-
    February 22, 2005
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    hey this is a good love poem i liked the begining the best for some reason...hum... lol. anyways, great write