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A Shute Limerick for Whatsinaname

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Once was an author named Nevil Shute
whose book "Marazan" was a bit moot
they wouldn't print bloody
they changed it to ruddy
still Norman Flowers gave Shute the boot


 


Birthday Wishes for Whatsinaname

Wishing you a birthday full of fun
Happier than one you've ever had
A day with all sorts of excitement
That's better than any ole fad
Special hugs and sweet little kisses
Is what I hope you get lots of
Nothing but joy and laughter
A day containing genuine love
Never take for granted your life
A day that shines bright for you
May you enjoy a long walk in the woods
Every morning that the Sun shines through

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#5
I just wanted to join in the celebration of his birthday...
Happy Birthday Joe!!!!
Written February 22nd, 2005

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  • earthstar
    September 13, 2006
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    excellent

    Never take for granted your life
    A day that shines bright for you
    May you enjoy a long walk in the woods
    Every morning that the Sun shines through
    These lines are so good and great advice never take one life for granted you have done a wonderfu job with the whole write the flow is wonderful Thanks for your great and wonderful comments thought of doing a book just can not convicne myself someone would want to read it. I think it great you did a book how did you make time to write or where to start. I think you are wonderful to write a book it sound so wonderful. Will look it up when I have more time thanks for the link i appreiciated you putting it in so I can find it. Take care thanks so much for sharing with me have a great day.


  • MargaretG
    February 23, 2005
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    Dear Sam, you've pleased Joe very much with these two poems, and that is the object of the contest! Well done, and congratulations!


  • Samplette gold member
    February 23, 2005
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    Thank you...indeed it is true..
    S♥m

  • mina nagi gold member
    February 23, 2005
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    Sam I liked your limerick…. Congratulations on winning silver…
    mina
    Ps: Is it true about the Marazan?


  • whatsinaname silver member
    February 23, 2005
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    Thank you very much for your birthday wishes sammy in poetic form. Marazan makes me very nostalgic and takes me on a trip down memory lane.Special thanks for making this a wonderfully memorable birthday.Best luck in the contest.


  • hugh wyles silver member
    February 22, 2005
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    Dear Sam,
    I don't recall you launching into limerick form previously but may be I missed something because this one seems to be written by a practiced hand. At any rate it's a much higher standard than the writing of that arrogant s.o.b. Amenhotep-son-of-Hapu
    who wrote that:
    The Kings of Peru were the Incas
    who were known far and wide as great drinkas.
    They worshipped the Sun,
    sacrificed men for fun
    but the victims considered them stinkas.
    ~~~
    Happy birthday to whatsinaname and applause to you.
    Good luck in the contest.
    Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.


  • SusanL
    February 22, 2005
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    I love the limerick and the acrostic of course is classic sam!
    Again you show the depth of caring you have for your innumerable friends.
    Wonderful.
    Susan

  • mina nagi gold member
    February 22, 2005
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    This is lovely sam... love the cake... yummy...lol
    mina

  • JM Kenyon silver member
    February 22, 2005
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    Joe should love this He adores limericks, Nevil Shute and is sooo adorable in that he is exceoted by his birthday as well. I know he will find that birthday cake appealing (especially if it's chocolate cake with coconut frosting!) He will love the border as well .Thank you soooo much for writing him such a lovely birthday wish! Best wishes and s...~genielassie~

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