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The Song Of The Old

Angels full of grace
Angers filled in one place

Hurtful tidings
Shameful findings

Peoples life of measures
Devils full of pleasures

This is the song of the old

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heheheh new one
Written February 22nd, 2005

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  • Xxxxxxxxx
    March 22, 2006
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    Darkly Delightful

    life and death
    heaven and hell
    pleasure and much much much pain

    -cheers

  • Speak87
    May 4, 2005
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    this is really great. i love the flow and rhythm that you encorporated. awesome job. keep it up...im off to read one of your stories now. i see that you write a lot (im in school though so i dont know how far i get) but i really like your style and im looking forward to reading more of your writes. great job
    blessed be
    ~Speak