To fall in love
To get kissed
To ace your tests
To get all pissed
We got plenty of time
We need to know
We don't need help
We fall like flakes of snow
I love this place
I wake up to a sunny day
I wonder what the future holds
I will hit many bumps on the way
You gather many memories
You will journey to many places
You only get one shot
You will see many unlike faces
It is life
It pulls us with it's mystical tide
It makes you wonder
It's door locks us from the other side
Author notes
Written February 21st, 2005
A contest entry
- Life by City wolf.
300 points, ended May 15, 2005, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Woot. This sent a shiver down my spine. This is written so perfectly, it's so amazing! I'm bookmarking this. I don't think I have any applauds left, but god darn it I will applaud this. It deserves it! It's one of the best poems I've read all day. Great work. Keep it up. Rock on \m/
Take Care,,
!*-Jasmine-*! -
Life does tug and pull at us. This is very well written, you could have gone on and on...Great job! The best to you in this challenge!!!
Renee ♥ -
thanks
Hey, thanks for the comment. Hows your vacation going? Mine has basically been work. Again, thanks for the comment. Keep on writing.
-tigar -
i really like this tiga!! ALOT! nice job and good luck in the contest
much love
-kate--
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