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A Translation:Boulevard of Broken Dreams:Green Day

I walk a lonely road
(no one understands, I'm all alone with myself)
The only one that I have ever known
(I've always been this way, no one ever understood)
Don't know where it goes
(I don't know where I'm headed)
But it's home to me and I walk alone
(It's always been this way, it might not change)
I walk this empty street
(I'm by myself in my thoughts, I'm an outcast, they don't know me)
On the boulevard of broken dreams
(in this graveyard in my mind, where all my dreams were crucified)
Where the city sleeps
(while everyone has their thoughts, I have mine, and they're not yours)
And I'm the only one and I walk alone
(I'm the only person here who understands my thoughts i'm alone with me)
I walk alone. I walk alone. I walk alone. I walk alone.
(I'm all alone, it's only me, I'm all alone, no one in my mind)
My shadow's the only one that walks beside me
(I'm by myself, with no one here beside but myself for company)
My shallow heart's the only thing that's beating
(I'm so alone I almost feel dead, if not for my heart, I wouldn't know)
Sometimes I wish someone out there will find me
(sometimes I'm so alone I want someone to understand me)
'til then I walk alone
(until they find me I'll stay here alone)
I'm walking down the line
(I'm on the edge)
That divides me somewhere in my mind
(a fine line between wanting to be alone and being too alone)
On the borderline of the edge
(almost at a breaking point in my mind)
And where I walk alone
(I'm the only one who understands these thoughts that take up space inside my head)
Read between the lines of what's
(what I say and what I think and know are three different things)
Fucked up and everything's alright
(my life's fucked up but your okay so nothing matters)
Check my vital signs to know I'm still alive
(by myself, no one to tell if i'm insane, or dead, the only way i know)
And I walk alone
(again, I'm all alone, must I say 1,000,000 times before you understand?)
I walk alone.I walk alone.I walk alone.I walk alone.
(I'm alone again, myself inside the place I call my mind)
I walk this empty street on the boulevard of broken dreams
(in this graveyard in my mind, where all my dreams were crucified)
Where the city sleeps
(they all sleep in their dull thoughts, but i'm out here all by myself)
And I'm the only one and I walk alone
(all by myself, with myself, no one else around who understands)
My shadow's the only one that walks beside me
(I'm by myself, with no one here beside but myself for company)
My shallow heart's the only thing that's beating
(I'm so alone I almost feel dead, if not for my heart, I wouldn't know)
Sometimes I wish someone out there will find me
(sometimes I'm so alone I want someone to understand me)
'Til then I walk alone (fade out)
(until they do I'm left alone inside my head, with my shallow thoughts and broken dreams)







Author notes

I like my interpretation because it's what *I* think. But you're not me, so you don't have to like it. This is what *I* think but who knows what it truly means?
Written February 21st, 2005

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  • GoldenHope
    March 28, 2005
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    well you are mostly just changing lines around, saying it in a different way, so its not that creative. the song is pretty much self-explanatory anyway. but i do like some of your translations ("I'm so alone I almost feel dead, if not for my heart, I wouldn't know" and "what I say and what I think and know are three different things")
    ~Jess

  • PennyB
    March 27, 2005
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    On your 14th line you have "there thoughts" it should say "their thoughts." What I read of this was very unique and interesting. Almost like being in your mind. "When I came to the profanity, I stopped reading." But, that's just me. For what I did read, I liked your way of expressing your loneliness. Penny

  • rockon
    February 23, 2005
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    yea, i don't completley agree with this and this song is pretty self-explanitory anyway (like everyone said.)
    Quite a few songs are written with no deep meaning, so i dunno if this will work.


  • leftoverinterest
    February 21, 2005
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    SWEET! This is a great interpretation of an awesome song. I looked at doing this song (same thing) for a different contest but couldnt get the words to come out right. Im a huge Green Day fan and I think youve done this song perfectly.


  • February 21, 2005
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    Fine job...tough to be objective though when reading something so opposite of how I wish people would think...as though there is no hope at all. Great interpretation though.


  • Methusala
    February 21, 2005
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    good

    interesting translation... and probably one of the best green day songs to pick... personally, i don't care much for them either, but that's just me


  • NoUseForAName
    February 21, 2005
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    Yeah- I almost entered this contest, but thought the same thing Hastings said. The song is pretty self-explanatory- most Green Day stuff is. But- for the purpose of the contest, I think you did a good job with it.


  • hastings xx
    February 21, 2005
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    Hmmm I have mixed thoughts about this. I thought that this song was pretty much self explainatory and this was just over-kill. But I see that these are your thoughts and how the song made you feel and I respect that. Yah got guts! Overall good job!

    Cheers!
    Hastings

  • INFAMOUSalyssa
    February 21, 2005
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    wow..hmm..to be honest with you..green day annoys me..but the lyrics are really beautiful and i think that you were comnpletely right with the translation. you did a fantastic job with this. thank you so very much for entering and good luck!

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