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A Cento Birthday

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I hope you find all you want in this world,
smiling from day to day.
A feeling of hope and happiness,
that will never go away.

Not a care in the world,
you have a wonderful mind.
A little ball of energy,
the strongest I can find.

 I wish for all the best for you,
and give you all my love.
Loving life happy and free,
something to be proud of.

 It's your big day so have fun,
a year older but still going strong.
This is your big day so let it all out,
is this wrong?

Author notes

This is a cento...all lines were taken from your personal poetry...Happy B-lated!!


allpoetry.com/Poem/517490 "forever in time"
allpoetry.com/Poem/256866 "my sweet dove"
allpoetry.com/Poem/537484  "Afront"
allpoetry.com/Poem/475206 "drifting"
allpoetry.com/Poem/451790 "flowing spirit"
allpoetry.com/Poem/302738 "ashley"
allpoetry.com/Poem/302733 "best of the best"
allpoetry.com/Poem/235351 "a great person"
allpoetry.com/Poem/701970 "to my Mom"
allpoetry.com/Poem/449436 "party the night away"
allpoetry.com/Poem/439506 "our joy and love"
allpoetry.com/Poem/321468 "I am Me"
Written February 21st, 2005

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  • LdyBrknWing gold member
    February 22, 2005
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    Hey Sam! Yeah!!! CONGRATULATIONS, girl, on the most unique poem I've ever had the pleasure of reading! I see that this won the Gold, and rightfully so! This was just too great, Sam! Fabulous job, girl! WootWoot!
    Paula


  • Sector-Hunter
    February 22, 2005
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    This was a very wonderful poem you had to go through a lot to get all the lines oh man that is cool this really made me smile you came up with a all new poem from my old poems and made the page look all nice and done up lol great work and again the fact you did so much to make this just has ne in aw lots of love Robin...aka SH


  • hugh wyles silver member
    February 21, 2005
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    Dear Sam,
    This birthday wish, with all your ingenuity in applying the lines from Sector-Hunter's poems into the cento form, must make somebody very happy indeed. The rhymes and the lines are in no way forced and if you hadn't provided the links to those twelve poems, we would probably never have guessed that the words are not entirely original. Applause.
    Happy Birthday Sector-Hunter.
    Love and hugs, XXX

  • LdyBrknWing gold member
    February 21, 2005
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    WOW!!!

    Hey Sam! This is AWESOME!!!! I know Robin is gonna LOVE this! What a fabulous, and unique idea! I wished I'd thought of it! I'm pea green with envy! This is just amazing! I'd wish you luck here, but I don't think you're gonna need it! WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL entry!
    Paula


  • qnhoneybee
    February 21, 2005
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    This is a wonderful way to write a tribute poem for someone on their Brithday. Your compassion for people never ceases to amaze me as I know these are not easy. You found some perfect lines to wish him a wonderful birthday.

    I also agree with your idea that genielassie hold a Cento contest as well. That would be fun.


  • Samplette gold member
    February 21, 2005
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    I will have to take a chance at that here within the next couple days...I would have a blast with your wonderful work...Sector had a lot of erotica that I by passed..
    I think I shall, maybe you should hold a contest as well, for us to write a cento on your work...
    S♥m

  • JM Kenyon silver member
    February 21, 2005
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    A fabulous poem Sam! You most definately have a knack for Cento's as well!

    A Happy Birthday to Sector Hunter fromme too though I don ot know him very well a'tall though he was in the "battle of the sesxes" wih us was he not? The men's captain I think

    Now...I wonder if my poetry would yeild poems as wonderful as yours and Sector Hunters have? Hmmm... Need to think about that one!

    This looks like it ought to win too as well as be a fine birthday tribute.
    BIG s and always the best of wishes... ~genielassie~

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