tearing the flesh from your skull
my teeth my only tool
ripping the skin from your bones
hate my only fuel
ripping you apart
like an animal
stripping your skin
like a vulture on
newly death stricken prey
protecting your remains
like a mother and her cubs
claiming you as mine
like a dog
marking its territory
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Written February 21st, 2005
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whoaa.. you kinda sound like me in the poem i just wrote.. this is really good though.. rock on my friend, rock on!
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Wow.. you have some issues in this write.. I love it!! Not a huge dark fan but this rocks.. The background does too.. Great job!!
~Krys~
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I'm blown away!
U some sort of songwriter, or r u in a band, 'cause this is an 11 out of 10!!!!!!!
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Kinda strange. I liked it though.
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Hm..I sense a lot of angery...oh, wait..that's misplaced love. 
(jk) Very interesting write, Brody...liked the imagery..the ghastliness of it all. 
Yummy. 
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nice! i loved the vivid imagry that you left out there, i also like the metaphoricle phrazes you used! outstanding write.
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Lol I love gore. Awesome job, love the title. First stanza kicked ass.
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Can we call any human being innocent these days? I think not
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so was this victim innocent?
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wow..The title caught my attention. I guess you might have to be very..open minded..or psychotic ~me~ to really get, and like, the peom... all in all its great
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this is an interesting poem. very powerful with how it is presesnted. The background goes with it very well and I have to say a nice choice of words. You are a good poet. Keep writing. laters
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oh Brody, I love this poem. the wicked imagrey really captivated my mins as I stood there and watched you totaly dismantle your victim. I love this very much!
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