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Bryan

I'm tired of your lies
They're all you ever say
I want the truth to come out
And I want it to come from you.
I dont want to sit and cry
And listen to the rumors pass me by
I'm gonna be strong this time
I'm not gonna fall apart
Not like I did last time.
These scars I carry wiht me
The ones I made for you
They will soon heal
And so will my feelings for you.
I cant go on depressed like this
And no suicde is not an option
My only option is to offically put you in the past forever.
All my friends were right
I'm sorry I ignored them for you
Your nothing but a prick
All you want is sex
Well sorry I'm not gonna give it to you.
I am the stronger one now
you will not control me
I'm sorry
But screw you
This relationship is over.

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Written February 21st, 2005

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  • April 18, 2005
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    good job...keep up the good work and good luck in our contest


  • Ms Raneika
    February 21, 2005
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    great write this poem is relative to me with a certain somebody thanks for entering my contest