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If Heaven Were on Earth

The shiver in the breeze,
the sunset over the seas,
the glimmer in your eyes
you continue on your knees.

The way you move your hand,
the phrase in the sand,
tears reflecting in your eyes
loss of breath; hard to stand.

Can’t remember what was said,
many thoughts in my head,
all that keep you in my eyes;
to me you are far from dead.

I peer down to see,
you staring back at me,
for a moment I shut my eyes
and fall out of my dream.

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Written February 21st, 2005

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  • April 5, 2005
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    beautiful!

    Wow! a truely wonderful piece!! The words flow so well and I really like the last line " for a moment I shut my eyes and fall out from my dream" .. The title is perfect for the piece The metaphors you have used to describe the personality captures it wonderfully... amazing job keep up the great work