Without you...
...I'm incomplete
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hahaha..lol ok u guyz this iz not evn a poem..i was jus really bored...and i jus felt like riting it..
Written February 20th, 2005
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EXCELLENT!
ITZ NOT SHIT U BITCH FACE!! DONT INSULT MY FRND FUCK FACE!!! LEAVE BITCH LEAVE!! DIE!!! -
A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM
A very beautiful poem. So very short yet you have said so very much. A wonderful way to say what you feel. -
errr......as a poem, its shit, but as something amusing, its great. lol. good to know you have a sense of humor. and as for pure....yea it is about me.
Always,
Chelsea -
lol yeah it took me forevr...MANNN I HAD TO THINK..lol im kidding i was singing and it jus came..."naturally"..i told u itz stupid and i wanna delete it...
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lol u butt! i was expecting something uh..more. lol
anyways im pretty sure it took you a long long time to write this up...poor person.. lol. so ill applaud! 
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neelum u freak face..lol
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dont delete dumass...this shall show your "development" through poetry lol...i sound like a nerd....kno wat this makes me think of? sum2 dying and saying it 2 their "loved one" lol, like wit their hand all reached out and shit.....lol watever its short n sweet n dont delete!! hey! thats a rhyme! woo im hyper and its 11 @ nite n i shud b dead tired....ok, every time u post something up, im gonna b like, its short n sweet n dont delete! lol im being gay byeeeee
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hahaha u guyz the poem sux...but thanx for commenting..im plannign to delete it..lol
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AMAZING!!
GOOD JOB MARIA !! I LOVE IT.."KEEP WRITING"
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omg you loser! lolol ILL APLAUD YOU! i bet you had to think real hard to write that up
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