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Another Time Another Place

 ANOTHER TIME ANOTHER PLACE

 

My mind fills with knights and dragons
As I dream of an exotic far away land
Sometimes I Fly on a magic carpet
Over Arabian Desert above the sand

Some nights I'm the Queen of the Nile
Wearing diamonds and pearls every day
Finding love beneath vast starlit sky

Just me and Sinbad upon a moonlit bay

Not knowing where dreams will take me
Or what new adventure will fill my mind
I do know when my head hits the pillow
My everyday doldrums are left behind

My mind captures romantic moments
thoughts race while I sleep each night
I dream of romance and pure fantasy

Full of excitement, passion and delight

My dreams are so far away from reality
When I awake they seem vividlyreal
Each night as my mind falls fast asleep
In my dreams I come alive, I can feel





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Written February 20th, 2005

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  • Sandygram
    February 22, 2005
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    Thank you for the lovely comment. I appreciate it. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram
    February 22, 2005
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    Thank youMis Donna. I so appreciate hearing from you. Take care and I hope all is well with you. Sandy :0

  • Sandygram
    February 22, 2005
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    Oh Annie wouldn't it be great if all our dreams were like this. I am behind on my comments again. I hope all is well with you and Susan is getting through her grief alright. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram
    February 22, 2005
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    Thank you for the nice comment Micharl. I do appreciate it. Take care my friend. Sandy


  • February 21, 2005
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    This is gorgeous. For some reason, don't ask why, it reminded me of Cinderella (With Brandy).. the song in there In my own little corner.. own little chair.. Whatever its called lol.
    Beautifully written I love it.

    Thanks for taking the time to write an original I appreciate it greatly.

    ~Lunar

  • Mia Donna
    February 21, 2005
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    Fantasy enraptures me completely. This totally took me to every place you described. Great write!


  • February 21, 2005
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    This is beautful Sandy, like Michael says traveling to a different place, and I find myself there so many times. You are wonderful with fantasy as with your spiritual writes, I most enjoy them...I wish you all the best in the contest, it's lovely my friend, God Bless you always, Annie

  • Michael 54
    February 21, 2005
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    Terrific

    It's as if you went there in person. It's like traveling on another plane of existence. I've been down that road many times. It's kind of like a cheap short vacation from reality. Don't ever lose it. Keep up the great writing. Take care and God Bless.

    Michael

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