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Mentor And Friend

People have passed me by
through the years of my life
and I've missed some and
haven't with others

I've had mentors before, I think
but I know that no one could live up to you
and your gentle ways of friendship and help
with my writing and with life as well

That's why I would be honored
to call you my AP mother
if you would have me as your AP daughter
and continue to be my mentor and a wonderful friend

because I've never met anyone in my life
that have touched me the way you do
and I am honored to know you and am
thankful to have come across your story

because if I hadn't read and commented,
I would have never gotten to know you
I would have never been blessed by your
sweet words and wonderful writing

That's why I would especially love
to be your AP daughter
because you are my mentor and friend
and your words touch me

in a way that I can grow from
Your wisdom and your strength
are qualities in you that I respect
with every part of my soul, so

I ask this question in an attempt
to express how much you mean to me
as a friend and as a teacher...
Would you be my AP mother?

Author notes

3} Write a poem about who you would love to adopt you. Don't forget you must convince them and us that you really want them to be your parent.

I wrote this a while ago, but it still fits in with the choice, so I figured, why not?

Oh and I also commented on To Mystical Onyx Fire and Ninja Monkey by Sapphire-Raven

Love you, my dear. Really. This is for you, in case you have any coubts. My AP sister sure did. Lol.
Written February 20th, 2005

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  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    March 29, 2005
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    Thank you for taking the time to comment on my entry. Every write that was written for someone important in my life holds a piece of my heart. It seems that I five my heart to everyone and keep none of it for myself. Good luck with judging.

  • ms-cuddles
    March 28, 2005
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    sweet tribute

    This was just like reading a piece of your heart ♥ You surely convinced me that you wish to be adoptted by Princess Muse and I have a feeling that she heard you loud and clear. Thank you for entering and good luck. Hugs~ Cuddles

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    March 26, 2005
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    Thank you for your kind words. I was actually afraid to ask because I was afraid I mgiht be turned down, though I am often negative like that anyway. However, I was wrong and I am glad. Tory is a beautiful person and a wonderful mother. I am proud to call her my AP mom.
  • Mrs. Dumas silver member
    March 26, 2005
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    This was wonderful. I loved it. I know exactly what you mean. When my AP Mama and I finally got around to "popping the question," we both knew we would be in each other's life anyways. This was lovely; I am glad you have found your AP mother. It's always great to hear of another few members joining as family.

    Hugs
    Jess

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    March 13, 2005
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    I love writing poetry for those I love and this one is just one of the many writes I have written for people in my life. Thank you for commenting.
  • Jade Darklinmoon
    March 13, 2005
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    this is a amazing tribute to your ap m,om. it was so heart warming and gorgeous.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    March 2, 2005
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    Thank you for your comment. This write means a lot to both my AP mom and I. This is one of her favorite backgrounds as well.
  • JesusFreak09
    March 2, 2005
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    Sweet...cute dedication as well..i love the BG...great job!
    -Kayla

  • GauArrowny
    February 20, 2005
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    Hehe, so sweet. I'm glad she accepted but after such words, who could resist. I'm glad I gave you link... I did give you link, right? I'm pretty sure I did. Anyway, I'm glad you're very happy.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    February 20, 2005
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    It is my pleasure to make you smile. I love doing that and the fact that you've accepted makes me very happy. Thank you for being here for me and helping me along. That really means a lot. Now for contacting J Rhys Davies..

  • Princess Muse silver member
    February 20, 2005
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    Such a beautiful write with such deep emotion and respect shown thoughout the piece...This brought tears to my eyes...Of course the answer to this poem has to be a resounding "yes", with pleasure.
    Tory Lin

  • February 20, 2005
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    I so did not have doubts.
    You never asked til that cute lil poemy

    Tis beautiful Sis.

    ~Angel
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