Curious being from afar
Wanders into our galaxy
A swiveling marble catches his obedient tiny eyes
Gentle giant hands eagerly reach out
As innocent childlike urges of touching everything play through
Metallic liquids swirl through his body
Our lives unknowingly waiting to be crushed
But when he pops the smartie
And hot chocolate rushes out
He will wail and moan until he forgets
Yet another Apocalypse
But he continues to wander
Peering through the milky starry universe
Searching for someone, something to play with
This lonely purple plasma man
Author notes
hey, this is what i thought of 
Written February 20th, 2005
A contest entry
- Be inspired by the picture by leander.
400 points, ended February 26, 2005, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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hehe ya leander liked the smartie thing too. it would be cool if the earth was filled with chocolate. thx
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Totally original
This is kind of a breath of fresh air. It's something completely original and it was just a pleasure to read. I love the description of Earth as a smartie. Very clever. -
hehe,
smartie 
interesting view on earth you have 
I really enjoyed reading your impression of the picture
Thankies for entering and good luck in this contest!
Leander
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