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How I Love Thee

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You came into my life when I needed you most
from the start I knew it was meant to be
You are my soul mate beyond any doubt.
You walked into my life that wonderful day
Instant memories recalled our past life
of a love so deep felt from our hearts.
So beautiful is our love,
I wept tears of happiness in my heart.
You gave me the love I've been seeking
that I've craved for since time began.
To love you has been my greatest desire
how I love to be wrapped up in your arms
feeling your tender kisses you give to me.
Oh my love how lucky we are to have found
each other, I give thanks every day for you.
Blessing our lives with children
Is the greatest gift we could ever receive,
we are soul mates 'til forever and beyond.





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2. Soulmates. Write about your ideal soulmate. Or write about if you think you've found yours. Describe why, how, where, etc...I want some emotion in this one. I want to feel your love.

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Written February 20th, 2005

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  • shubs
    August 6, 2005
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    Beautiful like all your romantic essays..this one very staid and stoic in comparison.nonetheless a tribute once again to the Love you so embody well and the chemistry that you display with your wordplay--Shubs


  • serene darkness
    March 28, 2005
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    very sweet and subtle, with a touch of deep adornment
    i loved this; it was free flowing and great

    Jen


  • jenelda silver member
    February 23, 2005
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    Thank you Nikki for commenting on my poem, I really appreciate it when poets take the time to comment. Don't worry you won't always be the age you are~Love~Jennifer


  • PsychoDreamer
    February 22, 2005
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    awh pretty .. little mature for my age but pretty
    Nikki


  • iamfromabove
    February 20, 2005
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    It's great when you meet someone you really connect with. This was a beautiful poem Jenn. Love Mia


  • angelica silver member
    February 20, 2005
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    *Very beautifully written Jennifer, to meet your soulmate is a wondrous experience, I loved reading it very much~Love~Joan

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