The wait has been long.....
come to me.
Follow my siren’s song
and find your way
to my heart.
Time will stand still within,
when finally
you are beside me.
~*~
Listen to the sound
of the wind.
She carries my siren’s song.
As long as a breeze blows
she will not rescind.....
the notes will continue to rise & fall.....
follow its melody.....
and come to me.
~*~
As long as the sun shines,
my siren will sing her song.
As long as waves move the sea,
she’ll whisper alluringly
“come to me......”
She will cease
only when
you are where
you have always belonged.
~*~
Come to me
my siren sings.....
Author notes
Me thinks my muse is a siren.....
Written September 29th, 2002
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I saw the title to this, and remembered that 'siren's song' was in the oddyssey, which I was supposed to read, but kind of skipped the assignment...but yeah. Very nice write!
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very wonderful.. it has a soft hint of sadness, too. as do many of my own poems. altho... i guess mine have a stronger sense of pain. oh well... it's very well-written!!!
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i love this poem,
and the repetition
gorgeous and full of power,
awesome.
,,,=^..^=,,, Clare -
you have expressed what i have been feeling for a little while now...the repetition of the words "come to me" is nearly hypnotic...i very much enjoyed this beautiful piece
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I love this. It has a real siren's call feel to it. very nice writing! -
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absolutely lovely. i am running out of words to describe your beautiful poetry, guess i need to break on my thesaurus, lol. :)
~Sweet~ -
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amazingly beautiful and touching a write love it well done!!! :)pjs -
excellent
I loved this..well penned..I have one about siren's too...take a look.. really liked this write... ~~~GILL~~~~xx -
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I've heard that song before....
It's a really pretty one too. But it's when the siren stops singing that we should be concerned.
I probably make no sense.
But I liked your poem. -
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Seems these days so many people are calling out away for love out there somewhere. I suspect the internet has something to do with that. But then even shakespear had is own song. Nice write.
Red -
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great. the breaking up of the poem sort of seduces the reader to journey further. very cool. -
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Awesome write. It felt like the poem was pulling me into the sirens song. Such an awesome write. majestic romantic and just truly alluring -
excellent
pulls at the mind.
*loves* -
excellent
so tell, who is the siren for???
a ship sailing in the wind looking for a shore to anchor within...
great imagination you have!! -
I'll never tell!
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Lovely. Just the way the subject should be presented. Alluring.
Hey, wait a sec, aren't sirens dangerous? Are you trying to lure me in? Crash me into the rocks? -
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Yah, I agree w/Nam...I think I am a walking Muse sometimes.
This was a very delicate read, so soothing.
I have a piece called Siren's Song also...not sure if it is posted or not.
WSD -
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wow what an amazingly beautiful write...
I really like this
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just lovely, we've been busy haven't we? keep writing darlin it ionly gets better. -
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There is something magical about the sirens.
You captured this magic beautifully.
Really enjoyed your words. Thanks for sharing. -
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stunning image & concept you have created here
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Or would that be more of a threat? Hmmm.....
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LOL Nam - how about if I promise not to leave? ; )
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don't touch it!
my muse is myself, since all my other muses left me.
:0)
Nam -
Mystysaint - thank you very much.....I was wondering why this was getting so many views! And you didn't even comment! You sneaky sneak! I am truly touched. Thanks again. ~Janet~
Edited by sunshinejls on right now because 'I needed to'. -
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that is very beautiful -
excellent
gorgeous and lovely. romantic. -
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depends on the vessel that has the siren..
A ship...floating till it finds , in fate, the one whose love is hard to find in an ocean of dreamers!
a train....well, it would stay on track all day long.
an ambulance....try to call out that desperately and it would perpetuate the longing!!!
I like the ship's perception best...lol.. In any case, this is a WONDERFUL thought and venue!!!!!
Beautiful. CookieZeal/DB -
excellent
very alluring
beautiful write -
lol@connor
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excellent
your muse is tempting...
almost unresisting i pull myself away...
to comment...just...
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Methinks your muse is a siren too...wonderfully written. We REALLY need to find someone who can write music. Between the 2 of us, we have like an entire CD. ;) =Fax Celestis -
excellent
the calling of a lonely heart...reaching out, searching, seeking...this flows well and is beautifully done. excellent:)
~bb~
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