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a life fanciful-
a semblance of a star
twinkling forever,
Could have dared
the blues???

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Written February 19th, 2005

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  • a u r a
    April 11, 2005
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    marvellous words Apurva,I applaud you for using the right words to creat so much with so little yet powerful

  • Bojju
    March 4, 2005
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    This is the style i admire more ..kind of my style ...u are alwyas able to tell so much withins a short period of words
    feelings are so deep
    excellent
    Bojju


  • Poet Raja
    February 20, 2005
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    beautiful!!!

    Are you feleing the blues or are you twinkling?

    Love from Coimbatore - Uncle Joel -