Flesh to flesh, mouth to mouth in the heat of passion. Bodies moving rhythmically, always in and out in hot ecstasy. Heated liquid seeping in between and around the union of love and desire. Two souls joined as one, never to be parted. Cries of wonder and bliss as they reach the highest peak of bliss.
Collapsing on top of one another, panting and sharing secret smiles. Whispering sweet nothings in the comfort of the other's arms, giggling and laughing at sexual jokes. Playfully fighting and kissing, then falling asleep in each other's embrace...
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Written February 19th, 2005
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Ooo...very hot and sensual. Captured the scene well. I did have one suggestion, though.
"Cries of wonder and bliss as they reach the highest peak of bliss."
You use 'bliss' twice in the same sentence. Could change one of them. Otherwise, perfection.
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*is too lazy to change it after a million years*
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Hmm, very sexy and sweet. I enjoyed the first part a lot. You write them well. I'm too lazy to even try. *kisses*
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Very very lovely drabble.
Hot and cute
I loved how it ended. jokes and sleeping in each others arms...
woah.. flash back.. coughs
Lovely
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very secy. It is so great how petic this is. Mostly erotica is smut, which is fine by me, but still I love how this is written
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