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Hope

Birds in the sky
Flying with the wind
Singing songs of hope
When one of their wings broke

Hope was still there
Although hard to find
Lingering somewhere in the mind.

Rose petals fell
When sadness aroused
There was no sound
When  hope came tumbling down.

Through the  night
When everyone sleeps
Hope was there to keep
When sadness weeps.

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Written February 19th, 2005

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  • cutebeka
    March 5, 2005
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    thanks a bunch

  • MoNiK
    February 20, 2005
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    Good poem...loved the imagery...props... ...keep it up...