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Earth's Footstool

alp's
proud feet
covered by
earth's blanket of
snow

Author notes

I love the symbol of both feet and mountain as pride, because I believe pride and humbleness are both the same coin.

Okay, so I woke up this morning and my husband joked about my feet under the blanket being straight up in the air.  'Get a haiku out of that' he said, lol.  Didn't do it in a haiku, but this form the lanturne is very cool.
Written February 19th, 2005

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  • poexlll
    February 20, 2005
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    great pic.


  • CarterTachikawa
    February 19, 2005
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    Beautiful poem. Maybe it's a not a haiku but it makes a damn good lanturne. A beautiful image. I enjoyed it. Thanks for entering and good luck!

    ~CT


  • April Renee
    February 19, 2005
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    lol. authors comment

    poem: interesting. different. good. enjoyed. good luck in the contest.

    Blu


  • JenP
    February 19, 2005
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    Beautiful, love it. Great picture