Drums
tell me
a story
send me to sleep
rain
Author notes
Right after I wrote this, it began to rain. 
Written February 19th, 2005
A contest entry
- Write a Lanturne- Ends in Two Days by CarterTachikawa.
300 points, ended February 20, 2005, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Nice image
Ah! This is nice, Ashlee! Heartiest Congratulations on winning the GOLD! Very well done 
This is soft and sweet as it starts, then picks up force and the downpour begins! Now you can collect all the rain in your gold cup
LOL
I enjoyed each line in this. You did deserve the prize!
-Charishma -
Congratulations. Well on a well deserved trophy. Your background is a wonderful compliment to your work.
~Michelle~
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very creative. congrads
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Everytime I hear rain, I'm now going to think of drums, lol. Nice write.
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Absolutely beatutiful. I am listening to those drums now.
Tecohe -
Very, very nice. Comparing raindrops falling to the beating of drums. Beautiful lanturne. Thank you for entering and good luck!
~CT -
ohhh wow
i love the rain-and this just sums it up with a beautiful
heartbeat of it all
very well written
ash♥ -
Oh Ashlee this is such a pretty form, had to look at the contest, kind of like a haiku...but not as many syllables, Drums? LOL...I hear the downpour, a nice steady rain...
all the best in the contest, Love and hugs, Annie
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