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Spring

Spring
laughter
follows me
in my garden
Fae

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Lanturne.
Written February 19th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • punkrocksmidge
    March 13, 2005
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    Aww, this is beautiful It really reminded me of spring, which I believe was the intent. Short forms can be hard for imagery, but this was great. Nice work, and thanks for entering
    ~Smidge~


  • CarterTachikawa
    February 19, 2005
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    Charming and warm, just like spring weather. Beautiful scenario. Best wishes in the contest and thank you once again for entering!

    ~CT


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    February 19, 2005
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    This is so charming. I absolutely love fairies and this is a wonderful scenario you have written. Best of luck in the contest to you.

    ~whisper