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bleed

i can't seem
to make
this pain
go away
no matter how hard
i try
no matter what
i do
your image
is stuck
in my head
in my heart
the word you've said
make my heart
bleed
tear into my mind
and stick there
i can't make
you leave
and im not
entirely sure
i want you to
go
i just wanted you
to love me
as i did you
as i do you
just leave me
in peace
or don't leave
me at all
im so lost
so hurt
i don't know
what to do

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Written February 19th, 2005

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