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Slots Slots Slots

Mr Bill Collector, You call me on the
telephone a lot
But I suppose you are just doing your
job. and I am in your collection
slot.
Slot Slot Slots that all I think
about
when I can't go to the casino and play
slots I just sit at home a pout pout
pout.
The thought of slots gives me comfort
with in.
every-time I go to the casino I just know
I going to win.
But as luck would have it, I am always in
the 99% that lose
Now I feeling bad, going home to unpaid bills
knowing slots was not the right path to
choose.
But I love playing those slots, so what can
I do.
Just sit at home, listen to the phone ring
knowing it's Mr Bill Collector, calling
me a lot.
While I  wait for next friday pay check, so
that I can get back to those slots.

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Written February 18th, 2005

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  • nice tush
    February 19, 2005
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    i like this poem alot, my boyfriend used to like the slots, he doesnt play on them that often now, good work. leave feedback on my work if you like any