Act 1
two bodies tangled in heat
clothing thrown to the floor
in silent agony she rides him hard
with each thrust wanting more
this is how they meet
Act 2
the shower, her body caressed with waters stream
he slips in without a sound
to take her from behind
as her FUCKING CUNT he pounds
till her moans become pleasures scream
Act 3
the table, legs spread, his head between her thighs
his fingers push, his tongue flicks, she's dripping wet
she moves her hips, to match his motions
as tongue lingers on clit, he's not done with her yet
his fevered pace increases, as do her sighs
Act 4
he sits on the couch, she takes him between her wanting lips
up and down his shaft, her hot mouth does slide
taking one ball, then the other into her mouth
from his pleasure derives her pride
she straddles him, as hips meet with thrusting hips
Act 5
lingering kiss, cool breeze gently stirs the air
whispering across bodies, chilling sweat soaked skin
impending danger of being seen, nakedness under starlit skies
her ass awaits his need, with sudden push he'll begin
her pain becomes a pleasure they'll share
Act 6
the final fuck, her mouth, pussy, and her ass await this game
toys abound to bring this, her fantasy, to reality
every orifice filled, a climax to top all others
hard and fast, she begs for more, he gives in to brutality
final pressure, explodes, he leaves, as she wonders his name....
Author notes
If you can't tell..My preference is any and all positions. The more you tangle the sheets during a night of sex, the better!
Written September 29th, 2002
In a list
A contest entry
- EDNA's NEW AND EXTREMELY NASTY BUT SURPRISINGLY INTELLECTUAL COMPETITION by Edna Sweetlove.
301 points, ended September 1, 2005, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cumm and Play by sensualbutterfly.
775 points, ended August 22, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very hot! I like the way you broke it into acts. Great job
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This is one HOT write!!!
he sits on the couch, she takes him between her wanting lips
up and down his shaft, her hot mouth does slide
taking one ball, then the other into her mouth
from his pleasure derives her pride
she straddles him, as hips meet with thrusting hips
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This contest is harder to judge than I expected. This one is definitely among the finalists. I applaud in between masturbatic strokes.
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Oooh hon I love this, you did a great job and it was... YUMMMM
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Good write!
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LOL Timothy...Ruined your plans..Sure seems to me that this might have made your wife happy!
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I hate admitting I loved this write, I feel so bad, heehee!
As I call my wife, honey, can you come hear for an hour or so, LOL!
Thanks for sharing, you ruined my plans for today, LOL!
A Fantastic, well described for sure, piece of poetry!
It's hot in here, pen on!
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Thanks Coyote..Why are the dream lovers always the best??? LOL.. :)
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excellent
Sounds like a Dream Girl I used to know. Since it was a dream I don't think she knew my name either. Loved the write, and your new pic, John. -
Sock...I haven't a clue..But I'd like one as well! Oh wait, then I would have to have someone to wear it for..Guess I'll have to pass! :)
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excellent
She wonders his name.... What a great ending. Where can I get that outfit I wonder? -
Lacertus...Thank you for stopping by and offering your opinion..Glad this didn't end up as a turn off.. :)
Shelly..I am glad you enjoyed..And I am betting that you know what I was thinking when I wrote this..LOL..Now I just need to find a helper to create at least some of the scenes in reality! :)
Debi -
excellent
WOW, what on earth was going through your mind when you wrote this?? envermind I dont want to know, Laughs!! good writing as always, Glad to see that you haven't lost your touch, LAUGHS!!! good and exellent writing, keep this up 'hands you an award'
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Loved how you did this , with the acts and such :) although when I read sexual prose, I tend to be turned off by the words fuck, ass and such when one is speaking of the act....but Im thinking this wasnt about lovemaking/beauty shared, this was for the hardcore sex challenge, and in that case you delivered perfectly
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LOL whonrock...But sometimes the cold can be just as invigorating.. :)
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brrrrrrr that shower was cold i had to take after reading this one!!! whew!!! if i read this one again, i'll end up having to take another one!!!
keep on writing!!
mike -
Thanks rainy...And you are welcome.. :)
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Lovely erotic write. Beautiful. Thanks also for commenting on my poem. -
thanks Desiree...I am glad you enjoyed.. :)
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Ditto what Nammer said. Very erotic and....and......wow. Loved it. Desiree ;) -
Free and Rdm thanks for stopping by.. :)
Thanks Simon...This has definitely been one of my more noticed pieces...LOL...Glad you enjoyed.. :) -
don't touch it!
Did i miss the poem?
I was too court up with the photo.
great stuff.
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whoa....great write.
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WOW, it's a super poem. -
LOL Tamara...It was the challenge that made me do it..Unfortunately my job got in the way of getting it posted before the challenge was decided...So I posted it anyway...As for the tel# I'm giving it to no one...LOL...Now ice cubes...Hmmm..maybe there is another act for this play somewhere.. :)
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mama mia, we got to find you a boyfriend... LOL
that was just to juicy
and since I have never seen a rated X movie, now I can say I have... giggles
this was good, finger licking good
running for the ice cubes!
you better not give out you tel# for I can never get through after this... *smiles* -
Hmmm...And which part would you audition for??? LOL...I know the part I want...Thanks for stopping by! :)
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Are there auditions for this play? lol
Very HOT.
Love it.
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LOL Desiree...I wish I knew his name...He is still an unseen face..Maybe soon he will appear! :)
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Wow this was Fantastic, ITIT....like your style. And what was his name anyway? Desiree -
Thanks jayb...I am glad you stopped by...And I totally understand the distant memory! :)
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excellent
mmm rings a bell in a distant memory this,ahhhh oh for a bit of steamy stuff,great work well penned,....Janet. -
I dunno...Need to find the perfect actors for the parts! LOL! :)Thanks Monk for stopping by! :)
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Perfection...................... when will the film be released? lol
Monk -
ilovepoems...Steam from this...I would have to agree..I just want to try it out! LOL...Imagination is nice..But reality is so much more fun! :)
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Sunny...Maybe there will be some more scenes soon enough...I don't know yet!
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I can feel the steam off this computer,wow,I'll be back in a while don't wait I may be awhile,lol.......
-Timothy -
don't touch it!
Whew!!!!!
Sounds like a great time!
So how bout you get righten some mo'
scenes....Fantastic job!
Loved it...*big smiles*
~Jess -
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omg, i am so friggin mad i missed this. not to say anything about my winner or runnerup, but this is awesome. Ugh my stupid impatience. I am so sorry, this is by far one of the most erotic pieces i have ever read. And I hope your not mad about me closing the challenge so quickly......i am truly sorry. I loved Nams and Zezs poems but this my dear takes the cake. *claps her ass off* ~*Amy*~ -
LOL astronome...Glad you enjoyed! :)
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Awesome write...that's why they invented ice cold showers. -
Thanks all! This is one I definitely enjoyed writing! :)
El Diablo...I wish my sex life was this steamy! LOL! :) -
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Oooh do I need a cold shower, make that a very cold shower. -
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very HOT!!!! -
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Sensual tension, the act of passionate love, or retraction from it. Images were visually sound.
A most excellent discription, your sex life must be steamy? -
Thanks unbridled!! I wish I hadn't had to work...LMAO...But seems that work always gets in the way of fun doesn't it? :)
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WHEW!!! STEAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMYY!! This was just PERFECT!! -
Thanks Nam! :)
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i think this one would have one over Zez's or mine. damn, that was totally hot, i need a long cold icey shower.
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Nam
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Pic courtesy of: http://www.nyrock.com/spc/1997/free.asp :)
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