D~ Death of my life
E~ Evil is inside my body
P~ Pain and hate I feel inside
R~ Rage in my heart
E~ Energy I dont have to go through this life
S~ Stress of everything on my shoulders
S~ Suicide is what I want to do and successfully do
E~ Envy for everyone else with there perfect lives
D~ Dealing with stress, that I cant take anymore!
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This is how I feel, I am so depressed!!
Written February 18th, 2005
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Good job, that was a fun read. This is such a great representaion of that thing that we call deperssion. Depression is so strange and ... well, when i'm not all sad n' stuff i find it facinating.
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This is a nice write, though sad. Don't tell me you feel this way, really. Perfect lives don't exist. I'm sure. But overall, it's an original form and structure. Nicely done. Take care.
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