My heart is breaking
This life forsaking.
Saddened tones.
Screaming drones...
You'll have to forgive me.
My spirit tries to flee.
The breaking of my heart...
Is tearing me apart...
This life that I live.
Is just what I'd give...
For my one and only.
Please don't leave me lonely...
You are the only one I love.
You are my angel from above.
I'd surely die without your embrace.
...That's why I'd do those things to her face...
You'll have to excuse me.
Her prescence threatens me.
It angers me!
Enrages me!
How dare she come inbetween our love!
And how dare she give me that rude shove!
She CANNOT have you!
I would KILL for you!
She had better hope that we never meet.
Torturing her would be my morbid treat!
She CANNOT have you!!
...I WON'T let her... I WON'T LET HER!!!!
Author notes
Written February 18th, 2005
A contest entry
- Jealousy..... Is Not Pretty by poet2angels.
300 points, ended March 3, 2006, 9 entries
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Emotion rules this poem and it is powerful and wonderfully written!,,,Good luck to you!...Lynda
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wow this is an uh, interesting piece. you should slit her wrist with a pin and remove her guts with a dull wooden spoon.
yea splinters!!! anyway, great poem, beautiful scene this displays.
Preston -
i like it a lot. i feel that way about my boyfriend sometimes. i get jelous when i hear him talk about some friends he has that are girls. but i trust him, so it's ok. but i guarantee i'll fight anyone who tries to take him. anyway, awsome poem, it really shows a lot of emotion.
~Alex -
wonderful i like all your poems
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