though i've known you for so little
to me it feels so long
i've learned at look at you with love
to care about the way you feel and
then and there it hits me like a cold slap on the face
that i might as well confess
i can't hide it any longer
it's building up inside
i care too much for you that my heart
begins to break from the joy you've
brought it no matter the time
we've been together & the love begins to hurt as it burns
eternal in my cold & frozen heart
i can't see through your quiet demeanor
so how am i to know if it's love that you feel too
but alas this valentines' day all i
want to do is be with you
in your arms that encircle me, embracing me, hiding me from the pain that i have suffered so frequently these years
that light i saw in you i would never have seen had it been
naught for the stealing of something of mine
that of which is my heart
Author notes
this is for my secret valentine i know it's a little late but i was preoccupied till now.
Written February 17th, 2005
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Is this valentinesecret or real. It shows grat emotion and feelings! If this is not a real person. keep dreaming for dreams do come true!!
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beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
thanks all and ruth it was a him i gave it to im a she!lol. you should have seen his face!he never knew i wrote.to the rest of you sadnees within love is the type that you know is true. -
that light i saw in you i would never have seen had it been
naught for the stealing of something of mine
that of which is my heart
What a great Valentines Day poem. I do hope you gave it to her
Ruth -
nice write
Oh this is just too good. A secret valentine is always so good. I got a few gifts from "secret valentine's" this year...very nice feeling. Great poem you have here; keep it up!
XOXO
~laura -
Sad but Very Good!
This is truly is sad
With love, the joy always seems to be mingled with pain, doesn't it? I learned that out the hard way.
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cool one
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