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chocolate and other things

A bit of sanctuary
in a cluttered dream
the goodness has been lost
Fold up your memories, place
them in a quiet room.
To be taken out one day, for a while
like chocolate, just a taste.

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Written February 17th, 2005

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  • magicflyingpig
    February 17, 2005
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    i like it. especially the first 3 lines. the end is surprising in a way...idk if i like it or not to be honest. it makes me pause and think tho. submit it to folio.