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i think im in love

with a smile upon my face
i walk through the world without a trace
of worries or troubles
i cant get you off of my mind and out of my head

i wish you were here for me to hold
to me your love is like gold
it shines and sparkles
and knows no bounds

floating like a flower on the sea
a long journey this will be
im going to have to make it without you
i dont know if i will be ok  
without your love to comfort me

i love to look into your beautiful brown eyes
and with a heart full of joy it makes me want to cry
knowing we cannot be together every minute of every hour

your love is so peacefull, like that of a dove
i cannot help it, i think im in love...

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Written February 17th, 2005

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